Focal Length : 70mm Shutter Speed : 0.001s(1/2000) Exposure : f/4.5 ISO : 200 Picasa2 : Cropped closer to the window & edited with "Sepia".
8 comments:
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i like this. but i think it would be better in black and white and the little boy looking out the window should have not smiled. like he did not know you were there.
Its a good image for composition but the grain is a bit of a concern. Personally for me, I tend to choose grain effect wisely as it very rarely works in most images. Try to lessen the amount of grain and go for a high contrast B/W. I think it would look much better. Cheers. Karl.
I'm with Karl here Ariel. The grain effect is to much to identify truely with the setting of this picture. Love the comp and focus. the boy can smile, I like that accent in this image. ^__^ A.
I like the composition, it looked like an old west photo,untill I opened it ,the little boy takes away from that feeling,had he been just staring out the window it would give the impression of a small dwelling in a third world country ,p/w,sepia all worth exploring,Dennis
Hi, Well I think you have a lovely photo, nice composition, well framed, great idea but the effect here doesn't work so well for me. It gives a tad too much noise (grainy) for me. Others mentioned B&W and I think that might of worked. The rest of the photo looks good to me
Hey there snake, I like the composition and concept. By using the quick exposure, it must of been a bright day, but also can create the grainy look, that then leads to loss of detail.This type of photo has great experimentation potential. croc
8 comments:
Review received via The Photo Challenge :
i like this. but i think it would be better in black and white and the little boy looking out the window should have not smiled. like he did not know you were there.
Rank : 4 out of 5
Reviewer : srench
Review received via The Photo Challenge :
Its a good image for composition but the grain is a bit of a concern. Personally for me, I tend to choose grain effect wisely as it very rarely works in most images. Try to lessen the amount of grain and go for a high contrast B/W. I think it would look much better. Cheers. Karl.
Rank : 3 out of 5
Reviewer : whiteeagle
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I'm with Karl here Ariel. The grain effect is to much to identify truely with the setting of this picture. Love the comp and focus. the boy can smile, I like that accent in this image. ^__^ A.
Rank : 4 out of 5
Reviewer : annemarie
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I'm with the crowd Ariel. We both are risk takers and get reeled back in sometimes. Go b&w. - Scooter -
Rank : 4 out of 5
Reviewer : JohnSBrown52
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Ariel, I like the composition very much. But I tend to agree with everyone about making it b/w. Other than that, I like it. BJ
Rank : 4 out of 5
Reviewer : bj611958
Review received via The Photo Challenge :
I like the composition, it looked like an old west photo,untill I opened it ,the little boy takes away from that feeling,had he been just staring out the window it would give the impression of a small dwelling in a third world country ,p/w,sepia all worth exploring,Dennis
Rank : 3 out of 5
Reviewer : Dennis 107
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Hi, Well I think you have a lovely photo, nice composition, well framed, great idea but the effect here doesn't work so well for me. It gives a tad too much noise (grainy) for me. Others mentioned B&W and I think that might of worked. The rest of the photo looks good to me
Rank : 4 out of 5
Reviewer : fremme
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Hey there snake, I like the composition and concept. By using the quick exposure, it must of been a bright day, but also can create the grainy look, that then leads to loss of detail.This type of photo has great experimentation potential. croc
Rank : 4 out of 5
Reviewer : croc
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